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    永遠的豐碑

    時間:2019-07-02 20:27:57  作者:  來源  查看:0
    永遠的豐碑
     張欣瑜
    今天,我讀了《黃繼光》的這篇文章。黃繼光為了戰斗(的勝利)舍身堵槍口的光輝英雄事跡,深深(地)感動了我。【評:概括主要內容,寫總體感受。】
    黃繼光犧牲在朝鮮戰場。那是1952年10月,朝鮮打起了最激烈的一場陣地戰(——上甘嶺戰役)。上級給他們(營)下(達)了命令(:),說是在黎明之前必須奪下已被(敵人)奪走的597.9高地。(進)攻擊開始了,很快黃繼光(所在)營就已經打下了一個又一個的山頭。當快要到達597.9高地時。突然,(敵人的)一個火力點射出的子彈像猛獸般地撲過來,戰士們屢次突出,結果都被比雨點還密的槍彈壓了回去。總攻的時間快到了,可是他們還是沒有打下597.9高地。(這時)黃繼光堅定地對指導員說:“指導員,請把這個任務交給我吧!”指導員答應了他的請求。他(黃繼光)和兩個戰士向敵人火力點沖去。【評:情況危急,主動請戰。描寫敵人的火力猛烈,為下文做好了鋪墊。】
    一名戰士犧牲了,另一名戰士也負傷了,(炸毀敵人火力點)這個重任落在了黃繼光(一個人)的身上。當戰士們都著急時,黃繼光張開雙臂,用胸膛堵住了敵人正噴著火舌的槍眼。這時,敵人、戰士們驚呆了,我也驚呆了,這么一個普普通通的戰士,竟然能為國家做出這樣的犧牲,真是可歌可泣啊!【評:壯烈犧牲,可歌可泣。抒情句表達了對英雄的贊美。】
    黃繼光為人類的正義事業而死,他死得有意義,死得偉大!我們將永遠懷念他!【評:評述黃繼光犧牲的意義。】
    為了保衛祖國、保衛人民,多少革命先烈用自己的生命書寫出無數可歌可泣的故事。我們今天的幸福生活正是無數像黃繼光這樣的英雄在戰爭中拋頭顱、灑熱血,用他們的犧牲(和鮮血)換來的。【評:闡述今天幸福生活的來之不易,是先烈用生命和鮮血換來的。】
    (讀了英雄的事跡后,再想想我自己,覺得自己是那么渺小,缺少戰勝困難的勇氣和信心,)就比如我在學習上,(遇到)的小小困難都不敢去戰勝。就比如我再學習中(態度)總是馬馬虎虎,不專心聽講,愛偷懶,遇到不懂的題目總是放下來,自己不(動腦)去思考,非等媽媽下班回來后告訴我。【評:這段話的前面加上承上啟下的過渡句,才能使上下段連接順暢自然。】
    讀了《黃繼光》這個故事后,我(受到了深刻的教育,今后)一定要向黃繼光一(那)樣,(堅強勇敢,)而對困難(不低頭,)勇往直前。努力學習,天天向上,長大后為建設祖國貢獻自己的一份力量,讓中國走向世界,奔向更美好的未來!
    評語
    本文開篇講述讀《黃繼光》一文,英雄黃繼光給“我”的印象。然后簡要地介紹《黃繼光》這篇文章的主要內容和自己讀后的感受,結尾表達了“我”向英雄學習的決心。條理清晰,層次分明。敘述內容寫得生動形象,談感受能結合自己的實際,與英雄對照分析,理解深刻,認識到位,是一篇不錯的讀后感。
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